Normally, I'm the type of writer who does everything in chronological order. I write my work from start to finish. I've been experimenting more with jumping around in the narrative, because there have been times when I've had what I thought was a brilliant insight about my novel but, because it didn't come up until later in the story, I'd push it aside, waiting to write it until I reached the appropriate point in the manuscript. Then, when I'd be ready to write about that great idea, POOF, it's gone. I really, really hate when that happens. Hence, the jumping around.
Even so, I kind of hate to move around to different parts of the book. It's just outside of my normal comfort zone, so it's something that always causes me more angst than necessary. What's also freaking me out about it is the narrative is working out differently from what I'd plan, which is also stressful. I do think my new idea is a better one that will make for a more solid story, but that doesn't mean I'm not going to sweat about it.
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They
walked into another concrete-lined room like the one they’d just left and, yet,
this room bore no resemblance to the other.
For starters, two of the four walls were lined with wooden shelves that
looked as though they’d been cobbled together with scraps of whatever someone
had been able to find. On these shelves
sat rows and rows of books. Two wooden
structures stood against one of the other walls, large pieces of some blank
substance balanced on them. A long table
stood against the final wall, its surface scattered with a strange combination
of materials; everything from bits of fiber and fabric to containers filled to
the brim with shiny objects. Curious,
Dara moved closer.
“What the... Are those, are those insects?” Dara asked in
disgust, leaping away from the table.
“Yes,” Tasha said, sounding rather
amused. Indeed, as Dara turned to look
at her, she could see that the other girl was studying her with a smile tugging
at her lips.
“Why would you have containers full
of those?”
“We use them for making pigments.”
“Pigments?” Dara asked blankly.
“For paints.”
“Paints?”
“Is there an echo in here?” Tasha
asked lightly. “Come on, Dara. I mean, I know this isn’t exactly the kind of
stuff that they teach you in your fancy Job Creator-sponsored school, but
surely you know what paints are.”
“Of course I do,” Dara snapped,
offended. “We use paints all the time at
Magnum. They’re meant to help seal and
protect metals from corrosion.”
“That’s not exactly what we’re using
them for here.”
“What are you using them for, then?”
“For painting, of course,” Tasha
said. The amused expression on her face
was making Dara even angrier, and the other girl must have noticed because she
stopped smiling and looked seriously at Dara.
“Damn. I sometimes forget how
little people on the inside know.”
“We know a great deal,” Dara said
stiffly. “In fact, Magnum’s known for
the top-notch education with which is provides all of its students.”
“They all say that, Dara,” Tasha
told her gently. “What they don’t teach
you about is artistic expression. That’s
what we use the paints for.”
“Why would you waste your time with
useless pursuits? There’s so much to be
done and so few resources that...”
Tasha held up a hand and
sighed. “Look, I don’t want to get into
philosophical arguments with you at the moment.
What I’m trying to tell you is that the reason why Mal, Raj, Letizia,
and I know each other is because we and other...like-minded people sometimes
gather in safe places, where we can pursue our interests.” Tasha gestured around the room, and Dara
followed the arc of her hand.
“How did you get these things? I’ve never even seen a book before,” Dara
said, walking over to the shelf. She
reached her hand out, but found that she was too afraid to touch the books, and
so she pulled it back.
“We gather them, whenever we find them. But a lot of what you see here—especially when it comes to the books—are things people have had hidden away for years and years now.”
“They should be recycled,” Dara
said. She couldn’t say why, but she
found that she didn’t like the way she sounded, as if she were some sort of
scolding schoolteacher or something.
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